you dogs 4real??? drop a beat

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you dogs 4real??? drop a beat

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Yeah, yo , you gonna ensure you gonna hold ya spot like a broken record on a fuckin piano top, you startin to turn like that hatin n***** , don’t be thinking hes bigger cos he aint washin himself he aint clean, from the highlight of the worlds theme , ruinin my fuckin dream, he don’t suit rap he make bitches turn, buts its all a trap, but shit I got platinum albums, like lebron James’s score counta , but im cravin, the shawty better be behaving, when im movin I aint lookin back , id be better of startin from scratch without your bullshit and common slack . you aint even pullin your weight , the scales aint even gonna break the work you do makes me stand tall makin me feel like pushin you n***** round into your high school dorm, that will end the war but life goes on , like an open door tryin to salvage the remains of my dead pawns.

i attack the opposition, cuz their aint no competition, when u give me a mic ill turn every mc into a fuckin dyke, i drop my rhythms left and right, people have heart attacks cuz its such an amazing sight, people ask for an encore and i just might.

gotta be crazy if u wanna take me on, kinda a big shot with my heavy duty bomb ,so you the army brigadier, shit well im the Instigator, you gotta be gain if u wanna take me down, cos messin with me means you never gonna get that crown.

get your hands of ma mother, your girls a splittin image off uh , put ya hands in ya pocket look up you gonna seem me locket sayin that im gonna blow ya head off with just a one mother fuckin shot in ya socket, you gone be down hittin ,around lookin, finally contained but bound for sound of the enternal realm. (little bits of real rap)


the plan goes down, every motherfucka tryin to show whos the best N***** round , take it from me the story goes on life after death, dont mean shit unless u got the tale to tell, cos im strivin to be the the best, hitten kennels aint making me the special guest.

no racism is intended
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I hate it when people use text to rap.
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its hard to understand some flow of rap with text i agree

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when i see you blazin u gone be thinkin that im here to praise ya , but truth is , you better be runnin coz ima be gunnin

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I consider myself the leading pioneer, flushin rymthes and twistin every newborns carreer, try to live life on the edge, manages to produce the best results in the end , waitin for the momment is the puma's strike , the human mind continues to develop and bust its prime. like im'a develop, the, armageddon, fresh music to relate to the current saviour, the autions payin ,its moneys guessin, its makin a lastin impression, to ensure lifes a combustion of multiple expressions, bring on the pope, the eyes witness ,the last saviour to control the humans condition, this songs a tune of numerous convictions, the worlds at its knees, bombs and pleads, but nobodys listenin cos we at war, firin grenades, battllin fuck all, rebirthing all the worlds flaws, with no care excpet animal crys, maybe signs, with some more and we'd finally get the idea, that the earths weak but im the leader, so go keep on killin' and ensure every victem, gets whats comin without no common constrictption, understand, thatim the main man , controllin my country will save the world.


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your first verse line bars what ever it was i cant tell by text was wack if slowed down and tried to put together i couldent find a flow for it, the otheres were better, try spitting something that isnt about thinking your the shit or poppin off rounds, hip hop doesnt need that, the greatest artists or groups im talking about atcq or rundmc for groups if ya didnt know) of all times didnt talk about guns all the time regardeless if you wanna make it you need different substance, money cars clothes hoes and guns doenst always mean success unless your trap music, try going lyrical like lupe or nas, or shit spit real life stuff like how pac did and how maino does, its alot more appeling to people than the shit they cant relate to, the best rappers stay in the game because they found a away to relate ( do not bring up lil wayne) i mean shit biggie held it down people related to juicy by him, or pac yea he wasent the greatest lyrical but his messages in his music people related, try switching it up next time your tube yourself and post it on here to so im not just readin im listening

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devilridermax wrote:I consider myself the leading pioneer, flushin rymthes and twistin every newborns carreer, try to live life on the edge, manages to produce the best results in the end , waitin for the momment is the puma's strike , the human mind continues to develop and bust its prime. like im'a develop, the, armageddon, fresh music to relate to the current saviour, the autions payin ,its moneys guessin, its makin a lastin impression, to ensure lifes a combustion of multiple expressions, bring on the pope, the eyes witness ,the last saviour to control the humans condition, this songs a tune of numerous convictions, the worlds at its knees, bombs and pleads, but nobodys listenin cos we at war, firin grenades, battllin fuck all, rebirthing all the worlds flaws, with no care excpet animal crys, maybe signs, with some more and we'd finally get the idea, that the earths weak but im the leader, so go keep on killin' and ensure every victem, gets whats comin without no common constrictption, understand, thatim the main man , controllin my country will save the world.


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this ones acutally about how the world is dieing, leaders focus on war and not the world itself

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thats DEEP DAWGGG

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